XIIIthSoundsSoldier's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Severed a Jazilluper]

Fantastic

Perfection my friend perfection! This WILL go gold just give it a little while. You truly captured the jazz essence here

Do you mind if i sample this for a hip hop tune? Feel free to say no if you wish just keep makin more of this for me to listen to!

margarine responds:

Go for it, I don't mind. Thanks for the review :D

[Black Cat]

Strategies for improvement time

Okay number one, move a little further from the mic and improve your volume, that increases clarity. 2, only spit your rhymes on beat. Dont think youre clever and try to incorporate 75 words onto one beat and still think your on beat. It wont work man but keep workin on dat in private. DONT SWAGGER. Youre unknown so we dont actuallly know if your doin that on purpose or naturally. Make your words make sense, dont use words that only the uber-geek has heard and understands just because it rhymes. If you dont have a word that rhymes find a metaphor or similie that does. SAY YOUR WORDS WITH FEELING MAN! Dont be all blah blah blah or we dont wana listen. Go for gold man! Also u edited your voice somehow , take it off or change that last sound to something else.
Gwan man im gunna b bak 2 hear da finished version coz i think u got potential.
Sfe.

malkavianxx responds:

Thanks for the suggestions, I was sort of in another state of mind when I wrote this, if you know what I mean. that might explain a few things. like the meowing. as for the big words, not everything I do is like that, but I wanted to have a song to show off my vocabulary... as much as I love rapping about "times" and "crimes" and the "throw-down" at the "ho-down" I wanted to write something a little more cerebral. but Im not saying its good. I just made it for fun and practice... thank you for your review

[All U Got 4 Me*Full Version*]

Ahh dude wtf!!!

I swear down i would have given you a str8 10 yh but bruv to me it sounds like youre missin a couple beats in ur drumline. Maybe its jus me but stil bruv das hyyppee. Lemmi rap on dat.

CrAz3 responds:

eh man thanx go ahead but send it to me when u done

[Bust that gun]

Pretty damn good

One of the best ive heard today, just dat bass click... maybe some harmonising melodies too an dis iz gold.

StormEagle1984 responds:

yeah i'm going to fix that.

[Another One]

Nice try but hmm

Better melodies next time man this is too simple. also the drumline is so classic its become cliché. Excellent strings tho, just that theyre not playin gud melodies. Reseach a lil bit of tunes, i suggest Kanye or Ray Charles for some truly great ideas.

Keep up the gud wrk man!

Traceless responds:

Will do man, ill put on late registration 2night.

[EARFUCKED]

You cannot make music

This not only reviews this submission but all.

You need to try harder man. At least make a steady melody and work from there

numbers responds:

back up off a nigga damn.

[The Takeover(Preview?)]

BLUUUUUUUD CLARRRRTTTT

DAS SIKKKKKKKKKKK ILL SPIT ON IT IF YA WANT IT WUD B MY PLEASURE MAN YOOOOO DIS SHIT IZ HOTT

Fury responds:

man i need someone to spit on this
it just screams for lyrics lol

~1~

[Keep It Street (2006)]

Dat shits hot b!

keep poppin dese tracks man an a lil dude named S.P. mite av work 4 ya

DJ-DairyKing responds:

Thanks. Chea. I collab with S.P. Tell em to it me up at RICE394 on aol/aim.